xm552 发表于 2011-6-19 13:49   全显示 1楼
情节布置很多,但是主角被虐总是心理不舒服.急于引进这个得罪沈老大的情节太急噪了.其实想不出主角逃脱的可能.难道以后主角都要向老鼠一样乱窜,然后靠运气逃脱一次又一次的追捕?这种安排虽然可写的很多,但是太紧张了,容易审美疲劳.
相比与这样一个老是走狗运的呆小子,更喜欢看到主角是一个会审时度势的聪明人.不要过早和不可对抗的对手冲突,继续泡妞收美的主线.
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